Final Images
After a class crit I revisited my work and took on board a lot of the feed back. The majority of the feedback consisted of using photoshop, which I found a lot of students had used for their editorials. I then went back and reflected on my feedback and re drew my images so I could digitally manipulate them via Photoshop.
These were the final outcomes and I was much more happier with my editorials after I had re done them, I think its really important to take some time to reflect on the feedback you have been given, especially when there are consistent points throughout such as the fact I should experiment on photoshop.
What went well?
- The images look more clear, tidy and professional.
- The colours fit more appropriately and don't seem as overpowering in comparison to the hand drawn editorials.
- The shapes seem more basic and clear without so much tone and shading
- Overall they just look a lot more visual appealing.
- I was able to reflect on feedback to improve my own work.
- I really like that I was able to simplify my work, I also really like the small amounts of tonal work, it gives the images depth and a tone of voice.
- The choice of colour supports the feel and emotion of the images, e.g blue/purple representing sad.
What could I improve on?
- Maybe develop some more images and show more experimentation of working digitally with Photoshop.
- Consider more uses of colour rather than sticking with a similar colour scheme throughout the whole three images.
- Perhaps Experiment with other themes other than people, e.g expand on the nature theme.
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